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English Article Revision Assignment instructions
- I know your main concern was to see how well the paper flowed, you use a lot of sentence fragments throughout your paper so I would go ahead and re-read (maybe even out loud) your paper to see how you can combine ideas or move them around in order to make one whole sentence, your flow should be much more better after that
- In you intro paragraph you should give some background about the book, you make great use of that in the first sentence of your first body paragraph so see if you can move that sentence on up to the intro paragraph English Article Revision Assignment Help
- Maybe look up some stuff about night terrors and PTSD and perhaps mention at least PTSD as part of trauma in your thesis. If you need some clearer understanding on PTSD/ C-PTSD I watch this youtube channel called psych2go which explain these terms really well.
- Maybe make your topic sentences for your paragraphs clearer. English Article Revision Assignment Help
- You do have small grammar errors in terms of wording so if you would like Grammarly is a Chrome extension you can use to help with that.
- In you intro paragraph you should give some background about the book, you make great use of that in the first sentence of your first body paragraph so see if you can move that sentence on up to the intro paragraph English Article Revision Assignment Help
- Maybe look up some stuff about night terrors and PTSD and perhaps mention at least PTSD as part of trauma in your thesis. If you need some clearer understanding on PTSD/ C-PTSD I watch this youtube channel called psych2go which explain these terms really well.
- Maybe make your topic sentences for your paragraphs clearer. English Article Revision Assignment Help
- You do have small grammar errors in terms of wording so if you would like Grammarly is a Chrome extension you can use to help with that.
Other than that I think you did very well, good luck on your final paper!
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